Your Personal Story: How to Package Yourself in College Applications



by Jenny Zhi

There’s been a lot of advice given in terms of completing college applications; some of them are common sense (don’t procrastinate, for example) but some I find very contradictory. One of my favorite vague and confusing pieces of college application advice is the concept of round versus pointy. We’ve all heard the virtues of being a well-rounded student, but we also all understand the appeal of being a student whose expertise is in a single area.
Throughout my high school career, I was always confused as to which piece of advice I should follow. Eventually I discarded either strategy and kind of just did whatever I wanted to, whatever made me curious, whatever inspired me. I thrived on my robotics team, delved into my art, worked hard to develop my newfound love for computer science, and picked up a new instrument, and I enjoyed all of it.
As college applications came around the corner, however, I was at a loss as to how I would package myself. I wasn’t really well-rounded (I lacked the community service and athleticism of a truly well-rounded student), but I didn’t excel in any of my interests either (I didn’t have computer science research experience or any programs to show, and my skill at the aforementioned new instrument was intermediate at best).
Yet as I looked at what I’d done in the past three years, a common theme appeared. My interests were interdisciplinary: I’ve always been interested in both art and technology, and my extracurricular activities, my schedule, my awards and honors, everything on my application, showed that. I had spoken to friends and teachers about my interests in both areas, I had written about it in the Joyce Ivy blog, and I was always interested in the latest news regarding interdisciplinary advances in technology. This desire to blend the two seeming poles became my story, and suddenly it became clear how I should package myself in my college applications.
I recommend treating your application as a story. It has to be focused, and all the components – essays, extracurricular activities, recommendation letters, courses, etc. – have to make sense when fit together; don’t leave any plot holes (those are terribly agonizing). I’m not saying to fabricate something or force everything you do to fit neatly within this narrative, but to reflect every so often on what your passions say about you. If you realize that your interests are all over the place, your story could be your adventurous spirit, your desire to try new things. If you are focused in one area, your story could include how your ultimate goal is to use your interest and expertise to change the world. There’s no one right way to do this; you could synthesize all the components that make up you into a narrative that is truly unique to yourself. In fact, the above examples almost resemble the traditional concepts of well-rounded and well-angular students, but it is no longer contradictory.
On the other end of this whole college admissions process, admission officers also look for a cohesive narrative within applicants. In one of my past interviews with an admission officer, he admitted that his job involved a lot of synthesizing and fitting together parts of an application. This includes things like family background and ethnicity, he explained, but also the content of an application.

So for any underclassmen reading this (or any seniors still writing their apps for those January and February deadlines): when you find yourself with some free time, think about your story. I promise you it’s not as boring as you think.

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